Wednesday
30 Jan 2013 4p.m

                         Check the error of  the Introduction

        Today we watched our friend's presentation who had been rejected yesterday. The presentation carried out very well and Miss Zu checked and corrected the error of their thesis statement then she gave a greenlight to all of the groups. Then, we proceeded to introduction, she wants to check them. We must ensure the grammars, sentences, and tenses are good. Miss Zu checked the introduction of all groups. While she was checking the other's introduction  ,Fikri and I checked the entire of  introduction. When it comes our turned, we showed everything we got. It's undeniable that Miss Zu actually have an eye like an eagle, she detected our errors then She immediately corrected it. Now, we good so we can proceed to the next stage, the Outline. It is Sound terrible to me.  Here it comes.