Wednesday
23rd Jan 2013 4p.m

                    REDO Thesis statement

     Yesterday our thesis statement has been rejected by Miss Zu because we did wrong in term of sentences which is the sentences fell apart when she read it untill she gone confused. I know it's awful then she asked us to redo it in class and do it in the group to discuss together.
Class today was held in library not in SL c112  where we were supposed to be because Miss Zu has something to settle down. She entrusted us to be there. In the library, we gathered around in group and discused on the table before we get in computer lab in the library. Many friends gave us a good idea how to make it. At 5.30 pm we're done and leave the library happily. 


so these are our thesis statement:

 Despite, baby hatch provided by government is the one of the noble step to protect these  unwanted babies and reduce the rate of mortality infant in Malaysia, however, there are strong claims that baby hatch implemented in Malaysia will bring more catastrophe than solution.

Although  government provide baby hatch to stop the homicide among the unwanted babies  but, there are strong claims that baby hatch provided will bring more negative result an positive ones .

Other claims that baby hatch provided by government is very effective to protect these unwanted babies from being harm  however, there are hard evidences that implementation of baby hatch could rise the baby dumping problem and other social problems rather  than to protect these unwanted babies from being harm.

In order to reduce the number of homicide among unwanted newborns from being arise, the government has provided baby hatch to protect these unwanted newborns from being abandoned or killed and seems more effective, despite from that some people claims that baby hatch provided give more negative impacts to the babies and community rather than positive impacts.

 WE ARE READY TO   PRESENT IT IN NEXT CLASS HOPEFULLY ONE OF THESE WILL BE ACCEPTED.