Wednesday
30 Jan 2013 4p.m

                         Check the error of  the Introduction

        Today we watched our friend's presentation who had been rejected yesterday. The presentation carried out very well and Miss Zu checked and corrected the error of their thesis statement then she gave a greenlight to all of the groups. Then, we proceeded to introduction, she wants to check them. We must ensure the grammars, sentences, and tenses are good. Miss Zu checked the introduction of all groups. While she was checking the other's introduction  ,Fikri and I checked the entire of  introduction. When it comes our turned, we showed everything we got. It's undeniable that Miss Zu actually have an eye like an eagle, she detected our errors then She immediately corrected it. Now, we good so we can proceed to the next stage, the Outline. It is Sound terrible to me.  Here it comes.

Tuesday
29 Jan 2013

                        Thesis statement accepted

Alhamdulillah today we presented our 3 thesis statements and one of  our's have been accepted. So, this is the thesis statement that Miss Zu accepted.

It is indeed that baby hatch provided by government is

 the one of the noble steps to protect these  unwanted

 babies and reduce the rate of mortality infant in

 Malaysia, however, there are strong claims that baby

 hatch implemented in Malaysia will bring more

 catastrophe than solution.

 It is not just our thesis statement that she accepted but all of my group of arguementative writting and only 2 groups still rejected and there another one have not present it yet. After we done about writting thesis statement, we go to how to do outline. I see it's quite complicated to do but we see it how in the next class. See you tommorow.

Monday
28th  Jan 2013

                              PUBLIC HOLIDAY

Today we have no class at all due to the public holiday for one day but tommorow  we have to present  our  presentation  about 3 thesis  statements that Miss Zu asked us to. Eventhough we already done it but we got to check them up for last time in term of sentences, spelling and above all grammar in order we're not doing same mistake.

Wednesday
23rd Jan 2013 4p.m

                    REDO Thesis statement

     Yesterday our thesis statement has been rejected by Miss Zu because we did wrong in term of sentences which is the sentences fell apart when she read it untill she gone confused. I know it's awful then she asked us to redo it in class and do it in the group to discuss together.
Class today was held in library not in SL c112  where we were supposed to be because Miss Zu has something to settle down. She entrusted us to be there. In the library, we gathered around in group and discused on the table before we get in computer lab in the library. Many friends gave us a good idea how to make it. At 5.30 pm we're done and leave the library happily. 


so these are our thesis statement:

 Despite, baby hatch provided by government is the one of the noble step to protect these  unwanted babies and reduce the rate of mortality infant in Malaysia, however, there are strong claims that baby hatch implemented in Malaysia will bring more catastrophe than solution.

Although  government provide baby hatch to stop the homicide among the unwanted babies  but, there are strong claims that baby hatch provided will bring more negative result an positive ones .

Other claims that baby hatch provided by government is very effective to protect these unwanted babies from being harm  however, there are hard evidences that implementation of baby hatch could rise the baby dumping problem and other social problems rather  than to protect these unwanted babies from being harm.

In order to reduce the number of homicide among unwanted newborns from being arise, the government has provided baby hatch to protect these unwanted newborns from being abandoned or killed and seems more effective, despite from that some people claims that baby hatch provided give more negative impacts to the babies and community rather than positive impacts.

 WE ARE READY TO   PRESENT IT IN NEXT CLASS HOPEFULLY ONE OF THESE WILL BE ACCEPTED.

Tuesday
22nd Jan 2013 4p.m

                             Present Thesis Statement

       Today  we presented our thesis statement and  we were the first because there's no one dare to volunteer to do so. As we expected before we entered the class, Miss Zu really mad at us because she wants 3 thesis statement to be presented not one and she rejected our thesis statement and redo it tommorow.  Today just a few group's thesis statement  have been accepted and all arguemtative writting group have been rejected..

Monday
21st Jan 2013 2p.m

                      NO CLASS:   My pleasure day

like Miss Zu said couple of days ago today's class is cancelled but she leaves us a small homework. We need to create our own thesis statement based on our broad topic. So, this is my thesis statement.
   
  I strongly believe that baby hatch provided by government is one of the giant step to protect these babies from danger. Despite from that baby hatch provided by government could bring more harm than good.

What do you think? 

Wednesday
16 Jan 2013 4p.m


                       Introductory Essay


Today we were learnt how to do a perfect introductory paragraph by using 1 or more hooks to grab reader's attention before we make our own. I show you what we learnt this evening:

The function of introductory

¨It attracts the reader’s interest to continue reading the essay / Get the readers’ attention.

¨It supplies background information needed to understand the essay.

¨It presents a thesis statement, the main idea of the essay, usually towards the end of the introduction.

¨It indicates a plan of the essay’s development (optional).

¨Set tone for the rest of the essay

The part of the introductory paragraph 

¨The Hook - Designed to grab attention immediately and give
 some indication about the essay’s topic

¨

¨The Transition - Moves the reader from the hook to the driving force of the essay….

¨The Thesis Statement - Makes the contract with the reader about what will be discussed without a blatant announcement.

  So Fikri and i decided to write our introductory paragraph by using Quotation as our hook. Below is the example of quotation hook that we preferred to:

¨“I am stupid. I am never going back to school.” These are the words spoken by a learning disabled child when he was in first grade. He cried as he slowly walked to his bedroom, shredding his schoolwork into small pieces. This was the first of many times when he and his parents would feel frustrated because there was nothing that they could do. Parents of children with learning disabilities have often felt unprepared to help their children with their handicaps and frustrated with attempts to seek the proper placement of them in the public-school system. The experience of school can be overwhelming for children who have trouble learning. The learning disabled student in the public educational system must deal with academic, social, and emotional problems.