6th February 2013
MY OUTLINE IS COMPLETED
Alhamdulillah after a week Fikri and I brainstorming on how
to make the best outline which is very challenging and hard to do because it
must follow the format and rules. Today, Miss Zu read our outline and we
noticed that she was very pleased what we have done. So, no time to talk lets
me show you our outline:
The negative and positive sides
of providing baby hatch.
I. Introduction :
It is indeed that government provide baby hatch to stop the
homicide among
the unwanted babies but,
there strong claims that baby hatch provided will bring
more negative result than positive ones.
II. Body paragraph:
A) Con 1: It
can reduce the number of abandoned babies dramatically.
1. According to Nasiruddin H. (n.d.) notes that baby hatch is a
place where unwanted babies dumped by their parent.
a) He added that human resources staff will inspect the infants and
they will deliver the infants to the Welfare Department after they ensured the
infants are in good health.
2. However this
factual statement might be inconclusive because
not most of unwed couple wants dump their baby in the baby hatch this fact is
supported by the annual report from police department shows unwanted baby still
dump in uncompatible place.
3. Pro 1: To begin with, unwed couple wants to avoid from being
disgraced by community due to their illegal action by dumping their infant in
the baby hatch.
a) According to Spokesman for UN Children’s Fund (n.d.)
states that unwed mothers are encounter a numerous of social stigma that guide the mother to unsafe abortions
then lead them to dump their infant to incompatible place.
B) Con 2: some
people say that the implementation of baby hatch good to reduce the rate of infant
mortality.
1) It is undeniably that
newborns are need high protection to ensure they can survive in this world and
give them another chance to live.
a) Harjeet Singh (n.d.) proposes that innocent infant’s life
can be rescued by providing baby hatch where these babies can seek a shelter
from being harmed.
2) In contrast, researches shown that the baby dumped in the baby hatch
could get proper attention in term of health care, food and protection is very
essential.
3) Pro : Another
reason why baby hatch must not be implemented because it still not utilize
effectively .
a) According to Faizah (n.d.) proves that there is still unwed couple
dumped and killed their newborn infant by flushing them down the toilet,
abandoned them in the dustbin or threw them into the river eventhough baby
hatch already implemented.
C) Con 3: For
those who are against these ideas may say that we should to dumped the babies
at the mosque or welfare centre.
1. Providing baby hatch brings us towards westernization and
modernization such as Japan.
a) When modernization absorbs in ourselves it will eliminates good
moral values, customs and rules of religions.
2. Pro 3: saving
a life is not wrong eventhough it is violate of law under section 317 of the
penal code where if you abandon your child below age 12, the parent of the child
will serve their life in jail but giving a second chance is one of noble steps.
a) We can’t judge or punish these babies due to their status
b) Everybody deserves a second chance to change their life.
III. Conclusion
According to the numerous
weakness and shortcoming what was our government provided for Malaysian people
is not permenant solution to curb baby dumping problem , it is proven by many
statistics shows baby dumping problem
is increasing every year eventhough baby hatch is
provided in Malaysia
and since the hard evidence provided here
proves that everyone should against of baby hatch implementation in Malaysia
because it brings more harms than good.
so, what do you think about our
outline? We are require your constructive comment to improve our outline.
Thank you :)
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